The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the manufacturing process for

the

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sugar

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production starting

from

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sugar

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cane.

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, the

the

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sugar

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production contains seven steps, beginning with the growing of

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cane and eventually completing

after

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the drying and cooling process.

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with, the manufacture of

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start

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from the planting of the raw material,

sugar

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canes, which take 12 to 18

month

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months

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to grow before they can be harvested. After the

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canes

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cane

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harvest

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by

automation

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machine or manpower

from

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, they are sent to the factory and crushed into juice.

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, there is the

filteration

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filtration

process, delivering

purifyed

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purified

juice with

limestone

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filter. Following the evaporating

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, turning juice into syrup by heating up, and the centrifuging

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which is

mean

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to

seperate

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separate

sugar

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crystals from syrup, it

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comes to the

last

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part of the

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production - drying and cooling. In the final

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, the

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crystals from the

last

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step

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are put ,and the

sugar

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can be eventually obtained after drying and cooling down.