The table shows information about the numbers of Australian people who visited the seven most popular destinations in 1999 and 2009

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of the popularity depending on Australian visitors’ travels to these destinations in 1999 and 2009 and

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the rate of each place’s growth.

Overall

, it is evident that, in each of the years, New Zealand and the United Kingdom had by far the highest and the

second highest

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proportions of visits

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Australians studied respectively.

By contrast

, out of seven

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, China was the destination where

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significant increase in the number of

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was reported within that time. Concentrating

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on how many Australian citizens visited the seven

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in 1999 and 2009, the vast majority of these visitors preferred to travel

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place which is observationally the closest country for them, accounting for 500, 700 in 1999 and over a million in 2009. The United Kingdom comes

next,

with 400,000 and 640,000, 100,000 and 240,000 higher than in the USA in 1999 and after a decade in turn. The remaining

countries

– Indonesia, Fiji, Japan, and China – greeted considerably fewer visitors in both years. Turning to growth rate, the percentage of increase in the proportion of

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tourists travelling to China made up 249%, making it the destination with the greatest level of rise;

however

, the figures for Japan and Indonesia were surpassed by China’s:

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the former composed 150%, the latter grew to 127%.

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the growth rates of Fiji and New Zealand were almost identical at 114, from 1999 and 2009

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the preference of Australians who journeyed to the UK and US

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moderately, at 60% and 33%

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order.