The diagram below shows how oil is extracted in the production of perfume. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows how oil is extracted in the production of perfume. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates how perfume is made using the distillation technique, which utilizes the capacity of
water
vapour
to capture the essence.
Overall
, there are four main stages in
this
complex process, starting with boiling
water
and ending with distilling essential oil.
First,
water
is heated at a high temperature in a tank placed on a flame. As the
water
boils, the
vapour
is collected and sent through a pipe connected to the bottom of another tank called the distillation chamber. Aromatic plants or flowers are put on the upper part to be steamed. When the
vapour
rises to the top of the chamber, it collects fragrant molecules and forms a mixture that
then
goes through a coil for condensing. The coil is placed in a tank with a cool-
water
inlet at the bottom and a hot-
water
outlet at the top, allowing warm
water
to flow. Once the mixture of
vapour
and essential oil has been cooled down by cold
water
, it condenses and becomes….
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, vapour with synonyms.
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