The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

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the proportion of urban residents in four Asian nations between 1970 and 2020, and

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anticipated from 2030 to 2040.

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, it can be observed that city dwellers experienced an increase in numbers,

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escalate in future

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.

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jump, Indonesia is estimated to have the

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percentage in total. Beginning with

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, which stood out as the highest figure in urban population by 1970.

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nation increased to nearly 50%, before falling to 40% in 2010.

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tend to reach 50% of

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living in cities in 2040. In terms of Malaysia, there was a significant escalation to over 70% throughout

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2020, with the prediction to have the most urban residents at 80% by 2040. Turning to the remaining regions, both Thais and Indonesians living in central areas started at roughly 18% and 13%, witnessing a slight rise to over 25% and 20% in 1990, respectively.

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, Indonesia had

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proportion of central residents than Thailand, at 45% against 23% in 2020.

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, Thais prefer to jump up to over 40% in participating in cities and more than 55% of

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settling down in urban zones by 2040.