Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

Nowadays, the importance of visiting

places

has developed. In previous times

individiuals

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individuals

did not have

chance

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a chance

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for visiting

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to visit

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places

where

conditions

are

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were

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difficult.

However

, in recent

time

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times

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,

citizens

have chance to

visiting

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visit

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these

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apply

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places

such

as

Sahara

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the Sahara

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desert or

Antarctic

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the Antarctic

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.

This

situation has both upsides and downsides.

This

essay will explain those below.

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Firstly

, almost every

people

want to explore new

places

.

Therefore

, many

people

go to various

places

. Thanks to these visits,

people

learn a

lot

of information and they can see numerous views for them.

Due to

these

places

,

citizens

learn to survive

for

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apply

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difficult situations.

For instance

, my uncle is

explorer

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an explorer

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and he

go

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to almost every

places

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place

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where

conditions

are difficult all around the world. Me and my uncle went

to

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camping two years ago,

I

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and I

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experienced a

lot

of

hardly

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hard

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issues,

however

, he did

him

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his

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job normally and he did not

experienced

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experience

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any issues.

Secondly

,

people

can

in

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be in

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danger in some

areas

. Some

places

such

as deserts or oceans where are

inclued

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included

a

lot

of

unknow

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unknown

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issues have a

lot

of dangerous items.

Morever

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Moreover

, individuals can experience numerous bad injuries or animal

attack

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attacks

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,

citizens

always should take caution because

any

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some

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people

do not know these

areas

the rate of safety.

For instance

, many

documentry

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documentary

show men or women who

are try

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are trying

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to survive in

danger

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dangerous

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areas

can experience a

lot

of hard things in television shows, sometimes they have to eat the

feces

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faeces

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of animals or drink

to

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ocean water. They can

experinced

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experience

experienced

difficult weather

conditions

. In conclusion, visiting

places

is

significant

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a significant

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activity for

citizens

.

This

activity has advantages and disadvantages. Almost all

them

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of them

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want to explore new

areas

where

conditions

are difficult and thanks to these visits, they learn a

lot

of data and they can learn to survive

for

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apply

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difficult situations.

On the other hand

, some

areas

are so dangerous for individuals,

they

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that they

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can experience a

lot

of bad things in these

places

such

as important

injuires

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injuries

,

bad

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and bad

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weather

conditions

.