A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country. He/She has written to ask for your advice. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter 1. Describe why you think he/she will enjoy it 2. Explain why you recommend studying at your university 3. give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear_________,
Dear Karma,
How are you doing? I heard you are planning to
study
abroad in my country?
I am so excited if you really are going to Change the punctuation
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study
here! It will be fun! I think you will enjoy it here, the people here are nice and my country is super different from your country. I know you will love the weather here and we can go on a road trip when you are here, I guarantee you it is really pretty out here! Anyway, did
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university are you going to choose? I hope you consider Change preposition
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my institution! We are really famous for the biology program which Change preposition
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with your program now! If you are really interested Change the verb form
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in studying
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here, I recommend you to
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, you should apply from the international website. They have steps by steps
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. Do some research and take what I wrote into your consideration, I really hope you will choose to Fix the agreement mistake
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here! Look forward to your decision!Submitted by evelynsuwandi2 on
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task achievement
Start with a brief introduction that directly addresses the friend's inquiry and its purpose to make the letter's intention clear from the beginning.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea. The first could talk about why your country is enjoyable, the second about the strength of your university, and the third about the application process.
coherence cohesion
Use more cohesive devices such as 'Firstly', 'Moreover', 'In addition', to link your points more clearly and signal transitions between different types of advice.
task achievement
Consider expanding on the application process with more specific advice or adding a paragraph about adjusting to life in your country. This will ensure a well-rounded response that fully addresses the task requirements.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,