the two maps below show a park as it is today and planned changes that will be completed in 2020 summarize the information
The pictures exhibit the
difference
layouts Replace the word
different
on
the science park from twelve years ago, which will be finished in 2020.
Change preposition
of
Overall
, the area expands some public facilities for transportation, Linking Words
while
the grassland is removed.
Linking Words
To begin
with, the park today provides Research and Development on the west and the University Hub Linking Words
opposites
it, which is next to the Offices. Correct your spelling
opposes
Furthermore
, the IT centre Linking Words
changes
to the Innovation Add a missing verb
has changes
centre
and is connected with the car venue, the railway station, and the enlarged Cyber Security.
Meanwhile, on the east, there are the cycle path and bus stop which are integrated with the car park. Capitalize word
Centre
Although
there Linking Words
are
no grassland near the business units, some paths and Change the verb form
is
road
Fix the agreement mistake
roads
are remained
the same.Change to the active voice
remain
have remained
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