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The chart below compares levels of recycling, as well as some less environmentally friendly forms of waste management, in fifteen European countries. Summarise it.

The chart below compares levels of recycling, as well as some less environmentally friendly forms of waste management, in fifteen European countries. Summarise it.
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The comparison
about
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 managing
waste
 is made between different methods in fifteen European
countries
, one is recycling the
waste
 material and other methods involve harmful aftereffects to
the
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apply
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nature
is
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as
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 depicted by the given chart. The information is calibrated in the form of
percentage
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percentages
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.
Overall
, the most striking feature of the given chart is that Greece and Ireland mostly
uses
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 landfill
method
 to handle the generated rubbish,
while
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 and Denmark are least interested in piling up the land with
waste
 materials. Taking a cursory glance, it can be clearly manifested that just above 20%
Germany
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,
Swedan
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Sweden
, Austria, Belgium and Luxembourg
uses
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use
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 Landfill
method
 to manage
waste
whereas
 Denmark and Luxembourg have similar proportions of around 60% in disposing of
waste
 by nature unfriendly incineration process.
Furthermore
, recycling
the
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waste
 material is preferred by
few
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a few
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 European
countries
such
 as Austria,
Begium
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Belgium
, Netherlands and Germany with
percentage
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percentages
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 nearly equal to 75%, 60%, 45% and 40% respectively. Moving to
further
 details, garbage removal by landfill
method
 is preferably used by
top lying
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countries
 starting from Greece until Finland, whilst these
countries
uses
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 only 20-30 % other two procedures for garbage disposal.
However
, France follows mixed ways of
waste
 disposal,
therefore
; 40% of litter is managed by filling the land with it and approximately 25%
rubbish
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of rubbish
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 management is done by
remaining
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the remaining
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 two methods.
Lastly
,
Swedan
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Sweden
, Germany, Austria and Finland
uses
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use
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 some other
method
also
 than
its
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their
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 counterparts.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, countries, method with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • waste management
  • landfill
  • incineration
  • environmentally friendly
  • sustainability
  • waste disposal
  • biodegradable
  • reuse
  • composting
  • hazardous waste
  • sanitation
  • conservation
  • reduce, reuse, recycle
  • circular economy
  • eco-friendly practices
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