The given maps illustrate the evolution of two neighbouring regions between over a period of 50 years.

The given maps illustrate the evolution of two neighbouring regions between over a period of 50 years.
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The provided figure represents the map of the development of Nelson City from 50 years ago until the present.
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, it is obvious
see
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that there were only a few communities and facilities in the past time, the modern world the town is surrounded by convenience stores. First of all, There are a lot of stores that have been involved in
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area. The first grand opening of the city, there is a university , train station, old market, and the huge city centre located along the main road. In the modern time period, shops have been added in the place to make the residents more convenient. On top of the map, it used to have only an educational institution, but in modern times, the hall of residence and a new shopping centre have been constructed beside the study place.
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, the new train station was built in front of the university.
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, The bike rental scheme was everywhere in the park to provide more activities for the resident, which students can transport by tramp from school to the park on the provided
trampline
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trampoline
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. Regarding the park in the middle of the area, there are new two convenience stores which had been witnessed on the left and right-hand side of the map, along the main road.
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, walking across the road, the restaurants and clubs are located near the river.
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