In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

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Flora and fauna are really important for our life not only to live but

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for surviving in

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and plants are becoming extinct. The main reason is urbanization.

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could be solved by encouraging digital

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. There are a lot of reasons,

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as air pollution, carefulness of people to

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, climate and urbanization.

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there are some reasons, the main reason is urbanization .

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,since two thousand fifteen the world built numerous skyscrapers the number of reservations dropped to fifty-four per cent. it is happening, because demand and population are increasing

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many buildings and green parks are decreasing, because of

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reason, second by second many livestock and flora and fauna are decreasing.

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there are many solutions, the main one is life should be digitised in all spheres . Many countries should encourage people to

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digital

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everywhere,

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as in schools, in the workplace and in other places.

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, in Canada ,since they

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digital

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everywhere, the quantity of

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and

animals

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is increasing. Nowadays many people prefer to

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electro cars ,because of petrol and gas. The price of gas and petrol are increasing.

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, if we

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kind of solution, we could save many

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and our

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. In conclusion, today a lot of

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and

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are increasing, for some reasons,but we can solve

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problem with some solutions,so l personally think that we must decrease electro and digital

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all over the world.

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task response

To enhance task response, make sure to clearly explain why urbanization leads to a decline in flora and fauna and how digital devices can actually help solve this issue. This will help strengthen your argument.

coherence cohesion

Employing more sophisticated and varied vocabulary along with more complex sentence structures will improve the overall cohesion and coherence of your essay.

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You have successfully identified urbanization as a primary reason for the decline in animals and plants.

coherence cohesion

Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps in framing your arguments effectively.

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You provided specific examples, such as the statistical drop in reservations and the case of Canada, to support your points.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
ecosystem
urbanization
deforestation
agricultural expansion
pollution control
greenhouse gas emissions
renewable energy
sustainable practices
overexploitation
invasive species
conservation
quarantine measures
eradication programs
public awareness campaigns
habitat destruction
climate change
natural habitats
species decline

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

Your opinion

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