In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?
Flora and fauna are really important for our life not only to live but
also
for surviving in this
worldDay
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world
animals
and plants are becoming extinct. The main reason is urbanization. This
could be solved by encouraging digital devices
.
There are a lot of reasons, such
as air pollution, carefulness of people to nature
, climate and urbanization. While
there are some reasons, the main reason is urbanization . For example
,since two thousand fifteen the world built numerous skyscrapers the number of reservations dropped to fifty-four per cent. it is happening, because demand and population are increasing as a result
many buildings and green parks are decreasing, because of this
. Therefore
, for
this
reason, second by second many livestock and flora and fauna are decreasing.
Although
,
there are many solutions, the main one is life should be digitised in all spheres . Many countries should encourage people to Remove the comma
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use
digital devices
everywhere, such
as in schools, in the workplace and in other places. For instance
, in Canada ,since they use
digital devices
everywhere, the quantity of nature
and animals
is increasing. Nowadays many people prefer to use
electro cars ,because of petrol and gas. The price of gas and petrol are increasing. Thus
, if we use
this
kind of solution, we could save many animals
and our nature
.
In conclusion, today a lot of animals
and nature
are increasing, for some reasons,but we can solve this
problem with some solutions,so l personally think that we must decrease electro and digital devices
all over the world.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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To enhance task response, make sure to clearly explain why urbanization leads to a decline in flora and fauna and how digital devices can actually help solve this issue. This will help strengthen your argument.
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You have successfully identified urbanization as a primary reason for the decline in animals and plants.
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You provided specific examples, such as the statistical drop in reservations and the case of Canada, to support your points.
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