The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Smmarise te information by selecting and reporting the main feautures and make comparasions where relevant.
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The information about donating money
by
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people
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British with different age groups during the Change preposition
in
years
1990 and 2010 is depicted by the bar graph.
Overall
, the most striking feature of the given chart is that adults below 50 years
of age donated more in the former year, while
in the latter year, individuals above 50 years
old did more charities.
Taking a cursory glance, it can be clearly manifested that in 1990 youngsters gave just above 15% money to the
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whereas
nearly 5% charities
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donations
in 1990 which accounts for 30% than 2010
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in 2010
donations
were just below 25%. In 1990 and 2010, there was a significant difference of 7% in terms of money giving between the donars
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donors
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old.
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further
details, old people
above 51 years
old were more kind; therefore
, in 1990, 35% elderly made donations
, whilst just below 40% donations
were made in 2010. Change preposition
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However
, a similar trend was again followed by the elder people
of age 65+ years
old, where a slight difference of 5% in donations
was seen in both the
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