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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved ?

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In recent years, there has been an unprecedented rapid rate of
biodiversity
 loss, which seriously undermines the biosphere's ability to support life on Earth. Many
species
 of plants and animals are on the verge of complete extinction, and
this
 is fraught with food shortages in the future,
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 of the health of the population and the planet. The main causes of their loss are climate change, habitat loss, overexploitation of natural resources, poaching and illegal trade.
Biodiversity
 plays a crucial role in maintaining food stability around the world,
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ensuring sustainable nutrition,
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improving the quality of life of rural residents
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 and improving human well-being. Global warming is felt by all inhabitants of the Earth. The world community recognizes that
biodiversity
 suffers the most from the effects of climate change.
According to
 the World Organization for the Conservation of Nature (IUCN), about 25% of animal and plant
species
 are currently endangered.
Due to
 climate change, reindeer are in danger of extinction, of which there were about 1 million back in 2000, and
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 there are only about 250,000 left. solve
this
 problem, it is necessary to stop the reduction of
species
,
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 is not enough: global
biodiversity
 conservation programs are needed.
And one
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 of the key mechanisms for the conservation of endangered
species
 is reforestation.
This
 includes planting new trees where they have been cut down or suffered from diseases and fires,
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controlling the spread of invasive plants, and protecting existing rare
species
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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