The given maps illustrate the evolution of two neighbouring regions between over a period of 50 years.

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The two pictures compare between neighbouring cities of Nelson in 2000 and today.

Overall

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, the

city

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has been growing throughout the years in

which

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apply

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new facilities have emerged

such

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as residence buildings, new shopping centres including a market. The

city

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is divided by a main

road

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Also

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, there is a sea in the south. Previously in 2000, Nelson

City

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had a few places. There was a university located on the north

side

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faced by the

city

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centre.

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, the old market and a train station were placed on the west. There was a main

road

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that

was separating

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separated

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the port and the other areas mentioned. Nowadays, there have been a lot of changes.on the western

side

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, there is a large building designed for residents,

also

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, a train station is built between the bike rental

schme

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school

and the university. On the right

side

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, of the campus area is a small building connected with the

city

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centre by tramline and a shopping place

also

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faced by another covered market.

However

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, the main

road

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is now just designed for pedestrians only. On the other

side

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of the

road

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, there is a restaurant on the left and bars and clubs on the right.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road, side with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

201 words

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The given maps illustrate the evolution of two neighbouring regions between over a period of 50 years.

Write a letter to the hotel manager to inform you are coming with a group of people to have a business meeting at his hotel. Introduce yourself and the group. Tell about the business meeting. Inform if accommodation is necessary

Some people think that news has no connection with people’s lives; so it is a waste of time to read newspapers and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fewer students are studying science at school and university, favouring more computer based subjects instead. Is this a positive or negative development? What are the reasons for this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?