Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

In present times, the

advance

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advances

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of

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in

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technology

are

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have

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driven people to do their daily

activity

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activities

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remotely because they have

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the convenient

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convenient

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doing

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of doing

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all things at

their

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apply

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homes

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home

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.

This

phenomenon certainly

have

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the

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benefits and drawbacks, I firmly believe that the advantages

outhweight

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outweigh

the disadvantages and will

be clearly describe

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through

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in

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this

essay.

To begin

with, working from

home

is

the

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one of

women

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women's

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dream jobs

especially

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, especially

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working

mom

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due to

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nurturing

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and

observe

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their children at

home

without worrying about their toddlers.

For example

, during working time at

home

, the

marital

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marriage

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could be watched their babies.

Moreover

, it could reduce the cost of transportation and heavy traffic could be decreased. To illustrate,

everyday

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every day

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in the morning, there are so many vehicles on the roads,

however

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a decision to stay at

home

working remotely can influence the

fallen

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number of cars.

Then

, most companies have benefits in their finance because they can reduce household

budget

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budgets

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such

as electricity and wifi.

On the other hand

,

eventhough

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even though

it has lots of benefits, they

also

have drawbacks to anticipate.

Firstly

, a lack of

relationship

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relationships

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with friends because they rarely meet in the office and get

stress

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with ease because they only spend their time at

home

.

Furthermore

,

home schooling

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home-schooling

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might be not a good choice

due to

children

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children's

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behaviour because

in

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apply

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their age most student should

be explore

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be exploring

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their

experience

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experiences

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with friends, most

home schooling

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home-schooling

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students are

introvert

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introverts

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and being a anti

social

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anti-social

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. In conclusion, there are advantages for people who choose online

activites

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activities

but

also

it has disadvantages to mitigate.