The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reportion the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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population
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the population
cities
of four different nations (Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia) from 1970 to 2020, with prospects for 2030 and 2040.
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Philippines
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the Philippines
a
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countries, which recorded over 30%. Correct article usage
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, from 1980, the rate of Linking Words
Malaysia
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in
cities
gradually increased, recorded at about 80%, which will have a significant Use synonyms
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to 1970. The rate of Thailand who Change the form of the verb
compared
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cities
rose in a similar way to Malaysia.
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it fell to about 40% in 2010. In the case of Indonesia, the Remove the conjunction
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cities
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increase
from 2030 to 2040.Use synonyms
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