Many people believe that the current system of both teachers and students in the classroom will no longer exist by the year 2050

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the way of teaching and learning in the classroom will
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in 2050. I highly disagree with
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notion as the current growth of technology,
it
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will help to give new additional solutions to enhance current
method
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of teaching and artificial
intelligence
will not replace human interactions. With various
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solutions offered by
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industry, it
also
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to help in
education
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area.
For instance
, in 2020 the world had
COVID-19
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plague that came across nations and made everyone
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online to reduce physical contact.
Although
the way of teaching has shifted from offline to online by video call, the method itself
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not changed. Video call is only a tool for the
teachers
to teach, the
teachers
only use it as their tool to give
students
study materials but they still learn and teach as if they do it in offline
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. Artificial
intelligence
and robots are currently in trend for
its
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many use cases, but
it
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will not replace the human touch and interactions between
teachers
and
students
.
For instance
,
robot
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will not understand if any student
had
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stress and burnout when studying or facing exams.
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, only human will understand how others feel based on their
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because we know exactly how stress
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like.
Therefore
, artificial
intelligence
and
robot
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will only give more options to learn but
it
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will not replace
connection
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the connection
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between
teachers
and
students
. In conclusion,
the
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cutting edge
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technology might give people different ways of learning but it will not replace human
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completely.
In addition
, new methods will only give us
a
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new tools and empower the process of learning. Emotions and how to handle
students
in different situations are something that
robot
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and artificial
intelligence
currently do not have.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • virtual reality
  • augmented reality
  • traditional teaching methods
  • personalized learning
  • AI (Artificial Intelligence)
  • global connectivity
  • online platforms
  • obsolete
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • digital classrooms
  • economic factors
  • maintaining physical school buildings
  • online learning environments
  • social interaction
  • practical learning experiences
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