The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Sunnarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fertures, and make conparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Sunnarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fertures, and make conparisons where relevant.
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The diagram compares the percentages of weekly revenue expenditure on eight various categories by families in one particular country in the years 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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, the most substantial change belonged to
food
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.
However
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, fuel and power changed the least. The share allocated to
food
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ranked first in 1968,
although
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it was overtaken by leisure in 2018.
Initially
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, the figure for four categories containing household
goods
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, personal
goods
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, transport and leisure were approximately equal at 8%.
While
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there was a considerable increase of about 6% and 14% in transport and leisure, respectively, personal
goods
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saw a decline to 4% and household
goods
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remained stable. The figure for housing was equal to that for clothing and footwear at 10% in 1968. The former experienced a significant rise to 19%
whereas
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, the latter moderately fell to %6. At
first,
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food
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and housing stood at 30% and 10%, respectively.
Food
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plummeted to 17%, but there was a growth of almost 10% in housing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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