The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart depicts how much
money
was donated to nations in development from five organisations between 2008 and 2011. The horizontal axis shows organisations named from 1 to 5, divided by colours and textures in the legend, where each colour or texture represents a year. The vertical axis illustrates the amount of money
in billion
dollars
.
Overall
, Organisation
1 and 2 increased the money
given, whereas
organisation
4 and 5 reduced it, and Capitalize word
Organisation
Organisation
3 maintained constantly
. The peak of donations to these countries was about 2,5 million Correct pronoun usage
it constantly
dollars
in 2011, while
the lower value occurred in 2011 also
, however
from organisation
4.
There is an unbalanced distribution of money
among the organisations and a wide range during the period of 4 years. The highest amount given by institution
1 in all years was 1 billion
dollars
, for institution
2 was more than 2,5 billion
dollars
, for institution
3 was about 1,75 billion
dollars
, for the 4th institution
was 700 million dollars
and the last
institution
spent the maximum value of 1,25 billion
dollars
.Submitted by fmulato on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, billion, dollars, organisation, institution with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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