The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate the average proportions of three different nutrients consumed in the USA, all of which people may be harmful if consumed excessively.

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, it can be seen that almost every nutrient has the same trend as each other, with a slight difference in

proportion

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for each part except added

carbohydrate

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, which has a considerable discrepancy in snack meals.

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the pie charts, added sugar accounts for the largest

proportion

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, 42%, in snack meals,

whereas

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sodium

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and saturated fat in snack meals are 14% and 21%, which are less than added sugar by threefold and twofold, respectively.

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, people in the USA consumed

sodium

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in dinner,43%, which is the most considerable

proportion

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, followed by saturated fat with 37% in dinner.

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, excess carbohydrate is added

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dinner as the lowest

proportion

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only 23%.

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, the percentages of several supplements are no different in breakfast grub, only 2% among themselves. The figures demonstrate a slight difference between the three of them in lunch by 10%, from the highest

proportion

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sodium

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, 29%, to the lowest

proportion

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in added

carbohydrate

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, 19%, and saturated fat, almost the same

proportion

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sodium

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, with 26%.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

195 words

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