You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

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Undoubtedly , nations
has
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changed the whole perspective towards athletes by offering
advance
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sports facilities to
top class
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players
,
whereas
,
other
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others
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argued
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about not providing
same
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condition
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to ordinary
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. The essay will critically
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both
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before presenting by
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opinion
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. To commence, it is indisputable that providing advanced sports infrastructure will be proved more favourable to any country.
First
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reason is elite
players
brings
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enormous pride to a nation and equipping them with
best
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resources will encourage them to perform their best
. .
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Adding here the
seond
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second
point , the complex conditions can put these top individuals in a habit of
delievering
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delivering
great results.
This
is because , tough conditions can
instill
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one's courage, make
players
to
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face their fear , excel
all
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techniques and
in
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result
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delivering
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best
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scores in
real time
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.
On the other hand
, normal
citizen
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citizens
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can be
benifitted
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benefitted
benefited
in terms of great health. More sports centre nearby motivates everyone to indulge themselves in physical activity .
Consequently
, results in healthier surroundings.
For instance
,
TOI
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survey revealed,
40
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that 40
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%
people
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of people
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agreed that practising a sport in everyday routine has offered them greater health results.
In addition
to
this
,
this
will foster
more
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socialized environment. If more people
participates
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in games they can stimulate
friendlier
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and cooperative environment.
To conclude
with
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, constructing
better
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games
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complex will favour normal as well elite
players
,
However
, In my opinion,
government
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should emphasize more on
alotting
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allotting
plotting
these advanced tracks to
world class
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world-class
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players
.
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Task Response
Address all parts of the task by discussing the positive and negative developments of specialized training facilities for top athletes. Provide relevant and specific examples to support your views. Your opinion should be clear and consistent throughout the essay.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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