The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts illustrate the

energy

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usage in a typical

Australian

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family and the proportions of

greenhouse

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gases released based on

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energy

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consumption. It can be clearly seen that

Australian

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people use

energy

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for heating the most but the

greenhouse

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gas

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is emitted from water heating the most.

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, the numbers of

greenhouse

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gas

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emissions are more than the figures for

energy

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used in all activities, except for heating

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the pie charts, heating accounts for the largest percentage, 42%

whereas

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its

gas

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emission is only 15%.

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Australian

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people use the second biggest amount of

energy

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for water heating, 30%,

while

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the

gas

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released is up to 32%, representing the largest proportion.

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Australian

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people use

energy

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for cooling the least at only 2% and it releases the lowest amount of

greenhouse

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gas

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at 3%. The consumption of

energy

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for refrigeration, lighting and other appliances

are

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7%, 4% and 15% respectively but the gases released are almost twofold.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, australian, greenhouse, gas with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

160 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Average Australian household
Greenhouse gas emissions
Energy consumption
Activities
Heating
Cooling
Water heating
Appliances
Lighting
Standby
Percentage (%)
Consumption patterns
Efficiency
Emissions impact
Renewable energy
Energy-saving measures
Sustainability
Carbon footprint
Electricity
Natural gas
Emissions breakdown
Energy audit
Environmental impact
Conservation
Mitigation strategies

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