The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the
energy
usage in a typical Australian
family and the proportions of greenhouse
gases released based on this
energy
consumption.
It can be clearly seen that Australian
people use energy
for heating the most but the greenhouse
gas
is emitted from water heating the most. Also
, the numbers of greenhouse
gas
emissions are more than the figures for energy
used in all activities, except for heating
According to
the pie charts, heating accounts for the largest percentage, 42% whereas
its gas
emission is only 15%. Nevertheless
, Australian
people use the second biggest amount of energy
for water heating, 30%, while
the gas
released is up to 32%, representing the largest proportion.
Also
, Australian
people use energy
for cooling the least at only 2% and it releases the lowest amount of greenhouse
gas
at 3%. The consumption of energy
for refrigeration, lighting and other appliances are
7%, 4% and 15% respectively but the gases released are almost twofold.Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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