The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line
gaph
Correct your spelling
gap
present
information about four countries of residence of overseas Replace the word
presents
students
in Australia.
Overall
, all student
from four countries increase gradually. Fix the agreement mistake
students
However
, the persentage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
students
had the
high position. Meanwhile, Malaysian Correct article usage
a
students
were took
the highest position at the beginning.
Indonesia started from the lowest point in 1982 but Change the verb form
took
then
went up dradually
from 1987 with 3000 Correct your spelling
gradually
students
it reached a pick
in 1998 with 25000 people. Correct your spelling
peak
Then
became the highest amoung
other countries. Correct your spelling
among
Malasia
started with 5000 Correct your spelling
Malaysia
sdudents
Correct your spelling
students
then
improve
quickly till 1998 with the Wrong verb form
improved
number
of 18000 students
but then
fell slightly.
Hong Kong had
fluctuated after 1998 with the Unnecessary verb
apply
number
of students
10000 in had standability then
finish with 18000 students
. Singapore started with
2000 only but Change preposition
in
then
had steadiness. After 1994 the number
of students
leap
sequentially and had Wrong verb form
leapt
Correct article usage
a stabil
stabil
rise in the Correct your spelling
stable
number
of students
overseas applicants 20000.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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