The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The diagrams illustrate how West
Park
Secondary School
was
changed during 60 years.
Verb problem
has
It is clear that
there are significant changes include
making Wrong verb form
including
new
Correct article usage
a new
car
park
, some facilities and so on.
In 1950, there was a main road in the north of the map. Also
, the school
was a single building which
located along the main road and Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
the right of the houses. The Change preposition
on
play ground
was located right behind the Correct your spelling
playground
school
building in
the right of the farmland.
Thirsty years later in 1980, the houses were demolished and Change preposition
on
new
Correct article usage
a new
car
park
was replaced as well as
new
science block was built. The Correct article usage
a new
school
was renovated and turned into main
Correct article usage
a main
school
. Also
, farmland was removed and sports
field was constructed. The playground and main road remain unchanged.
In 2010, Correct article usage
a sports
Correct article usage
the car
car
Correct article usage
the car
park
was extended Correct word choice
and
which
the land of the sports field was added to Correct word choice
and
Correct article usage
the new
new
Correct article usage
the new
car
park
. Furthermore
, a third of the playground Add a missing verb
is asighned
asighned
to Correct your spelling
assigned
designed
sports
field. Add an article
the sports
Science
block and main building remained unchangedCorrect article usage
The science
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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