Many parents today pay for private tutors to teach their children after school hours. Do you think this is a positive or negative development？

It is clear that

children

suffer

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pressure

in

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these days. A large number of

parents

employ personal tutors for their sons and daughters during evening and weekend classes to Improve their

kid's

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academic performance

However

, I think

this

is a negative

development

because it affects

offspring's

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the offspring's

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emotional growth

along with

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parents

have to spend

an

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extra

money

. A

further

explanation will be presented in

this

essay. To commence with, going private

tution

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tuition

brings negative

development

to

children

because they do not have time for

relax

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and play, as

an

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consequence, they might

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psychologically

such

as depression.

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is because kids Spend more than seven to eight hours in

school

, So they

should

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need some

relaxations

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after

school

otherwise

children

are being

under

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pressured.

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, Psychologist Said that offspring's Social Skills and

imgination

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imagination

Power Can

affect

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when they face study pressure.

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, evening

tution

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tuition

causes negative consequences

to

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kids.

Furthermore

,

parents

have to spend more

money

on their

sons

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son's

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and daughters'

education

besides

school

fees.

This

is because schools collect more

money

from

parents

as

school

fees, so

parents

should not pay

an

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extra

money

for improving

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to improve

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their

kid's

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education

unlike they except from schools to provide and enhance

student's

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students'

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studies.

For instance

, Indian

parents

always send

then

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their

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little ones to private

tution

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tuition

and they pay an extra amount

on

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education

.

In other words

, wealthy families can only send their kids to

tation

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tuition

but middle class and lower class. offsprings do not have a chance to get a standard of

education

,

Then

this

trend brings negative

development

. In conclusion, private

tution

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tuition

class

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classes

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can affect

children

's emotional growth

as well as

social skills and imagination powers. I think

parents

employ

tutor

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tutors

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for their kid's

education

after

school

that

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. a negative

development

because

parents

have to spend

an

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extra

money

for

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on

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toddler's

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education

. I hope

this

brings plenty of adverse effects on society.