Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree what other measures do you think might be effective

As private cars are becoming more and more pervasive in our society, the relative problems

such

as

traffic

jam

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and environmental

pollution

have drawn extensive attention of

public

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. Some people

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that the best method to address these issues is to elevate the price of

petrol

, and they have raised some evidence to support

this

opinion. But in my estimation, I don't agree with

this

view and I believe there are plenty of measures

could

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be implemented to address these issues more effectively. It can be deduced that the purpose of increasing the price of gasoline is to oppress the use of

petrol

, but we should not ignore that crowded

traffic

and environmental

contaminating

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are resulted from a myriad of reasons but not the consumption of

petrol

solely. Constraining the use of gasoline would not cause crucial influences on these problems.

Conversely

, it would pose some obstacles to public transportation, and bring some societal problems

such

as

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dissatisfaction and

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of

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. Because

petrol

are

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essential to both commuters and some

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professions,

such

as drivers, fossil energy industries and fight industries' employees. Actually, the emerging crisis of

pollution

and

traffic

could be solved by some other measures.

Firstly

, governments should promulgate some policies to promote the

utilizing

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of

electrical

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vehicles, which can suitably meet the public demands of

traffic

,

while

diminish

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the negative effects on

environment

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the environment

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.

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Moreover

, encouraging

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society to choose public transportation

such

as

bus

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buses

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and

subway

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could be a proper solution. The prevalence of public

transporting

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can address both

the

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congested

traffic

and environmental

pollution

.

Finally

, legislating some pertinent rules to prohibit vehicles with some specific numbers to be

drived

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driven

derived

on each

weekdays

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has been proved an effective solution.

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, by

adapting

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adopting

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such

a method, Beijing has gained some achievements

about

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countering

pollution

and

traffic

jam

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. In conclusion, I personally disagree increasing the price of

petrol

to be

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the best solution to

traffic

jam

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and environmental

pollution

, and I believe there are a lot of measures

can

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perform better than

this

method.