This line chart diagram depicts that the number of teenagers in UK follow habit of eating vegetables.
The line graph apparently shows that many teenagers in
UK
followed Correct article usage
the UK
the
vegetable diet Correct article usage
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during
1960 to 2020.
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According to
the graph, there were fluctuations in the percentage of the youngers
who Correct your spelling
younger
sticked
to Correct your spelling
stuck
the
healthy eating. In the year Correct article usage
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1980
there was a surge in the people who consumed vegetables Add a comma
1980,
however
the numbers gradually reduced during the 1990s.
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, in 19060 only a fraction of people obeyed Correct your spelling
Furthermore
the
healthy vegetable diet yet the percentage Correct article usage
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augmented
in the years Verb problem
increased
of
1970 to 1980 Change preposition
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where
5% increased Correct word choice
when
into
15%. Change preposition
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Consequently
, the digits shrunk abruptly tto
5% during the period 1980 to 2000. Correct your spelling
to
Moreover
, for the next 10 years, the figures had a moderate enhancement upto
10%. The quantity persisted till 2020.Correct your spelling
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