The 3 pie charts illustrate the rate of 4 types of transport are driven in the United Kingdom in 1965, 1985 and 2005.

The 3 pie charts illustrate the rate of 4 types of transport are driven in the United Kingdom in 1965, 1985 and 2005.
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The Pie charts
portrays
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the
prize
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price
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of four kinds of transit driven in the United Kingdom for every 20
years
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from 1965 to 2005. To embark on, the rate of private cars
had
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been booming over the
years
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. The charge
of
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for
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private cars was 40% in 1965
however
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it was more than
a
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half in 1985 and 60% in the year 2005. Whilst, the recreational
vehicles
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cost had been dropping down over the
years
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. In 1965 the rate of recreational vehicles was 15%, in 1985 it reduced
around
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5% but again it
had
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a
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rise
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up to 8% in the year 2005.
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, the amount of public transport
is sustaining
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almost the same from 1965 to 2005. The public transport rate was a quarter in 1965 and declined to 20% in 1985 and progressed in 2005
upto
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up to
22%.
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, the lorries and other transport retained the uniform cost between 1965 and 1985
howbeit
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it minimized to 10% in 2005.
To sum up
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, there is
no
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not
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much
differences
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difference
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in the charge of transmits during the
years
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1965 to 2005.

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