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The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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The provided bar chart illustrates the information on the expenditure in one week of the families, in two different years, 1968 and 2018. The data is given in percentages. In general, it is obvious to see that in 1968, people spent most of their money on food.
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 in 2018, they tend to expenses more on leisure stuff. First of all, in the year 1968, food was the highest spent, a mere 35%, which was nearly hit the peak. Another cost of living that the residents tended to buy was housing, clothing, and footwear, accounting for 10%.
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, leisure, transport, personal goods, and household goods were the unpopular things to bring.
Besides
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 spending costs in 1968, in the 2018 period, leisure goods were the best seller at 22% over a week.
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, housing and transportation costs were witnessed in the highest position, around 13%-19% respectively.

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