The bar chart compares the proportion of 4 divers transportations usage throughout the commuting to work in one of European city in 3 separate years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The unit is measured in the percentage.

The bar chart compares the proportion of 4 divers transportations usage throughout the commuting to work in one of European city in 3 separate years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The unit is measured in the percentage.
This
bar chart depicts the figure for 4 divers transportation used throughout commuting to work in one of the European cities in 3 separate years 1960, 1980 and 2000. It is clear from the graph that , a brief assessment of the chart reveals that car consumption drastically increased over 4 decades as opposed to the bus, which saw a massive drop-off in the same frame.
According to
what is shown, In 1960, cars, with around 7% of commuters, constituted by far the lowest popularity among the listed transportation.
This
figure jumped by six-fold to nearly 37% in 2000.
However
, the number of passengers commuting by Bus decreased noticeably by 25%, from just below 40% in 1960 to 15% in 2000.
To sum up
, we could say that,during the period 1960 and 2000, cars and motorbikes were selected by an equal number of people by 5%, which was the lowest percentage
according to
the given information.
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