The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comaprisions where relevant.
The presented table provides data about the use of police budget by various sources in 2 years, from 2017 to 2018. It is clear from the graph that , The illustrated pie charts demonstrate information on what the collected cash was spent.
According to
what is shown, in both years the vast majority of money
from the budget was financed by national governments, whereas
a tiny minority was separated from other sources (grants). As can be seen in the first chart three out of the money
spent on officers as well as
on staff’s salaries, however
approximately nine times less money
spent on technology. By 2018, all 3 source options
showed an upward trend. Meanwhile, the top improvement was by local taxes 11.1m of growth. Moreover
, spending money
by 2018 decreased salaries
Change the noun form
salary
options
, and stayed with no change in buildings and transport options
, technology options
showed a 6% rise.
To sum up
, we could say that,The total figures for police budgets were 304.7m and 318.6m respectively.Submitted by Leb.7149 on
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