You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask for some help for me.
I am a 2-course pupil and for some reason, I lost my identification
card
. When I was riding home in a taxi it fell off and I thought it was next to me when I looked later it was lost. As you know it is playing a big role in this
area.
Within the card
, I am facing many problems. First,
the guard does not enter the study. If I'm lucky enough to convince him, I can't use the internal devices because they all work with the card
. And so I have not been able to study for 2 days. This
is having a big impact on my attendance and my studies.
I want to ask you for a new card
. Without the card
, I was in a lot of trouble. You. I trust you and I trust you to help me. I have one more request, can't we organize something else instead
of these cards? Because it's hard to lose, I don't want it to happen to others.
I look forward to seeing your reply as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely.BobSubmitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, ensure that your letter has a clearer structure. Use paragraphs effectively to separate different points. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea, such as introducing the problem, explaining how it affects you, and then making a specific request. Transition phrases between paragraphs can also help improve the flow of your letter.
Task Achievement
While you successfully conveyed your situation and request, refining the tone to be more formal would enhance the letter. Avoid casual phrases and strive for a more formal register, suitable for a letter to the director of student services. For instance, replacing 'for some help for me' with 'to request your assistance' could make the tone more appropriate.
Task Achievement
To further fulfil the task requirements, ensure you clearly state your request towards the beginning of the letter. This helps the reader understand the purpose of your communication from the start. Additionally, closing the letter with a formal sign-off, such as 'Yours faithfully,' followed by your full name, would be more appropriate when you haven't used the recipient's name.