The table below show information about age, average in come per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant
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The provided graph illustrates the data about youngsters, people 60 plus, average revenue per person and the poor in
California
, Utah
and Florida
. Units are measured in percentage
and dollars.
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
Overall
, almost all categories of Utah
show the lowest point, except in term
of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
aged
under 18. Replace the word
ages
Additionally
, the figures for California
and Florida
in aged under 18 and average income remain approximately the same information.
According to
the table, the percentage of young people in Utah
reaches a peak with
28%, Change preposition
of
whereas
the proportion of older people aged over 60 shows the lowest point at 8%. The figure for youngers
in Replace the word
young people
California
and Florida
has more or less similar percentage
with 17% and 16%. Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
However
, the proportion of older adults in Florida
is 10 % more than in California
.
On the other hand
, the average income in Utah
amounts to just 17.000$, and it’s the smallest amount among other states, while
this
category for California
and Florida
is around 25.000$. Moreover
, nation
below Correct article usage
the nation
poverty
line in Add an article
the poverty
Utah
is just 9%. Yet, there are 16% and 12% the
poor in Change preposition
of the
California
and Florida
respectively.Submitted by ina1_95 on
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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