The bar chart below shows the percentafe of australian men and women in diffrent age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates
percentage
of Australian men and women, who exercised regularly in 2010Add an article
the percentage
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and categorizes Remove the comma
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Correct pronoun usage
them in
in
six age groups. Change preposition
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Overall
, approximately half of the population did physical activities regularly, with men tend
to do more physical activity in almost all age groups, except in the youngest group.Wrong verb form
tending
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