The bar chart below shows the percentafe of australian men and women in diffrent age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentafe of australian men and women in diffrent age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates
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the percentage
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of Australian men and women, who exercised regularly in 2010
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and categorizes
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six age groups.
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, approximately half of the population did physical activities regularly, with men
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to do more physical activity in almost all age groups, except in the youngest group.
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