The bar graph displays the consumption of fast food in five different countries in 2010 and 2020. Summarize the data and analyze any significant trends.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of fast
food
consumed in five countries; the United Kingdom, Germany, France, Japan, and China, in the year
2010 and 2020.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, fast food
consumption is relatively rising in every nations
. China has the sharpest rise, Change to a singular noun
nation
while
Japan is minimally inclined.
According to
the graph, in 2010, the United Kingdom initially
had the highest percentage, with 23%, followed by Germany and France, 20% and 19% respectively. Meanwhile, the two Asian countries used to have only 15% consumption rates.
However
, in 2020, the Chinese doubled the amount within a decade, as jumped to 32%. In contrast
with the Japanese, the proportion of the population having fast food
only increased by 2%, still being the country that has the least amount of fast food
. Moreover
, the remaining countries equally have approximately 4
to 5 percent rise. Correct article usage
a 4
As a result
, the United Kingdom dropped to the second largest number, with 28%. Germany and France are closely behind, with 24%.Submitted by pimpisut.sata on
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