The bar graph displays the consumption of fast food in five different countries in 2010 and 2020. Summarize the data and analyze any significant trends.

The bar graph displays the consumption of fast food in five different countries in 2010 and 2020. Summarize the data and analyze any significant trends.
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of fast
food
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consumed in five countries; the United Kingdom, Germany, France, Japan, and China, in the
year
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2010 and 2020.
Overall
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, fast
food
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consumption is relatively rising in every
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. China has the sharpest rise,
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Japan is minimally inclined.
According to
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the graph, in 2010, the United Kingdom
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had the highest percentage, with 23%, followed by Germany and France, 20% and 19% respectively. Meanwhile, the two Asian countries used to have only 15% consumption rates.
However
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, in 2020, the Chinese doubled the amount within a decade, as jumped to 32%.
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with the Japanese, the proportion of the population having fast
food
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only increased by 2%, still being the country that has the least amount of fast
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.
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, the remaining countries equally have approximately
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to 5 percent rise.
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, the United Kingdom dropped to the second largest number, with 28%. Germany and France are closely behind, with 24%.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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