You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Some people argue that university

students

should fully concentrate on their major study,

instead

of spending their time and energy on other irrelevant

subjects

. From my perspective, I disagree with

this

kind of opinion for the following reasons. First of all, it is a general consensus that cooperation between various

subjects

can conduct surprising and excellent outcomes, what's more, it can

also

improve the comprehensive abilities and social skills of

students

.

This

is mainly because the power of an individual is limited but it could be significantly increased when a group of individuals work together.

For example

, a lot of colleges are now persuading the educational mode that

students

majored in different disciplines consist of a class and complete the homework together, everyone not only ought to fulfil their duties but

also

can learn knowledge from their peers, during the process of cooperation, their team spirit, social skills, the sense of responsibility is improved as well. In

this

case, intelligently

students

could dive deeper into their own studies, emotionally they could build interpersonal relationships and gain practical skills in all regards.

Therefore

, learning other

subjects

in addition

could help them have better performance in their own fields.

Secondly

,

for

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university

students

,

they

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are facing the turning point that they need to make career choices, which could have far-reaching impacts on their lives.So there is a necessity for them to have attempts at various fields apart from their present ones and think twice before their graduation.

For example

, many

students

solely learn basic disciplines and know little about the

subjects

of universities, not mention to the

further

professions. So there is a high probability for them to regret and want to explore their full potential and find out what they are really interested in. It is quite common that people change their occupations sooner after they attempt to.

As a result

, it can give

students

a second chance to choose their path by encouraging them to learn other

subjects

. Certainly, I don't deny that gaining a qualification might be vital, and some people insist that

students

should only make

effort

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in their studies and graduate as soon as possible since

this

will contribute to sustainable and stable income resources. It might be true up to a point, but I am convinced that youth should not settle at

such

a young age, they should try as much as possible to grab different opportunities, and

this

can

also

lead to greater success, wealth and reputation. To summarize, I disagree with the view that college

students

should only concentrate on their own

subjects

because learning other

subjects

can provide a wider range of career choices for them and promote their other abilities which are

also

important to them.