The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The bar chart illustrates how much families spend on weekly income in multifarious items
an
unknown nation over the period of 1968 and 2018.
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in an
Overall
it is clear that
the
past period people spent Change preposition
in the
the
huge Correct article usage
a
amount
on food whereas
after fifty years people spent the most amount
on leisure, housing and transport.
In detail, in 1968, food was the most basic thing, so people paid huge amount
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amounts
while
fuel and power was
the least Change the verb form
were
expenses
, at just above one-third and around 7 per Replace the word
expensive
cent
as well as
food expenses
and fuel were reduced by 17 and 5 per cent
in 2018. Leisure expenses
was
the highest Change the verb form
were
amount
in 2018, which accounts
for nearly 22 per Wrong verb form
accounting
cent
and it had only almost 9% in 1968.
In contrast
, travelling and housing expenses
were
increased in 2018 than 1968, which was increased by almost 14 and 19 per Unnecessary verb
apply
cent
respectively. Surprisingly, household goods were
maintained the same Unnecessary verb
apply
amount
on weekends
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weekend
expenses
, at nearly 9%. In addition
, personal items and clothing and footwear we're
reduced in 2018 as compared to Correct your spelling
were
in
1968, which was 4 and 5 per Change preposition
apply
cent
respectively.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, expenses, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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