The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The bar chart illustrates how much families spend on weekly income in multifarious items
an
unknown nation over the period of 1968 and 2018.
Change preposition
in an
Overall
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it is clear that
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the
past period people spent Change preposition
in the
the
huge Correct article usage
a
amount
on food Use synonyms
whereas
after fifty years people spent the most Linking Words
amount
on leisure, housing and transport.
In detail, in 1968, food was the most basic thing, so people paid huge Use synonyms
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amount
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amounts
while
fuel and power Linking Words
was
the least Change the verb form
were
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expenses
, at just above one-third and around 7 per Replace the word
expensive
cent
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as well as
food Linking Words
expenses
and fuel were reduced by 17 and 5 per Use synonyms
cent
in 2018. Leisure Use synonyms
expenses
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was
the highest Change the verb form
were
amount
in 2018, Use synonyms
which accounts
for nearly 22 per Wrong verb form
accounting
cent
and it had only almost 9% in 1968.
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In contrast
, travelling and housing Linking Words
expenses
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were
increased in 2018 than 1968, which was increased by almost 14 and 19 per Unnecessary verb
apply
cent
respectively. Surprisingly, household goods Use synonyms
were
maintained the same Unnecessary verb
apply
amount
on Use synonyms
weekends
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weekend
expenses
, at nearly 9%. Use synonyms
In addition
, personal items and clothing and footwear Linking Words
we're
reduced in 2018 as compared to Correct your spelling
were
in
1968, which was 4 and 5 per Change preposition
apply
cent
respectively.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, expenses, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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