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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reportion the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reportion the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart compares the
proportion
 of
population
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the population
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that
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living in
cities
 in 4
countries
 in Asia between 1970 and 2020.
Also
, the
population
 between 2030 and 2040 was predicted.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
percentage
 of
residents
 of urban areas in these
countries
was
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exprienced
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experienced
a
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steady growth and the
country
 which will have the
most
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largest
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population
 in 2040 is
the
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Malaysia
.
Philippines
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The Philippines
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 and
Malaysia
 had the highest
proportion
 of
residents
 in 1970, respectively and the most salient is the increasing rate of the
percentage
 of
population
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the population
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 in metropolitan parts
in
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the
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Malaysia
.
Former
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The former
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country
 had merely 30% in 1970 which was the highest
proportion
 among the other
countries
.
during
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time
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the time
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, it had a general increase and it met its peak in 1990 whose
proportion
 was about 50% and it reached
to
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about 40% in 2020. It was predicted that the
population
 of
cities
 in the Philippines to reach above
of
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50% in 2040 and it will be third in rank.
On the other hand
, the
population
 of
cities
 in the latter one grew exponentially. The
proportion
 was 30% in 1970 and after that, it
was
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increased dramatically until 2020
whose
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percentage
 was about 70%. It was
also
 forecasted that the
percentage
 will meet its peak at about 80% in 2040 and
Malaysia
 will be first in rank in the end.
On the contrary
, the
population
 of
cities
 in Thailand and Indonesia was much less in comparison with other
countries
. The
population
 of
the
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Indonesia was between 10% and 20% in 1970. But, it had a significant increase and it reached
to
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about 50% in 2020. It was
also
 predicted that its
proportion
 will be about 60% in 2040 which made
this
country
 second in the rank,
although
 its
cities
was
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were
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 the least populated at first.
Residents
 of
cities
 in Thailand in 1970
was
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were
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 approximately 20%.
Likewise
, but less dramatically, it can be seen that its
proportion
increasing
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increased
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 generally during
years
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the years
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 and the
percentage
 of
residents
 in metropolitan areas in 2020 was reported about 30%. It was forecasted that the
proportion
 of
population
 in
cities
 in
the
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Thailand will be merely 50% in 2040 and it will be the
last
country
 in the ranking.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, population, cities, countries, percentage, residents, country, malaysia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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