Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the Airforce just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern era, it is controversial
if
Correct word choice
whether
women
should be entitled to serve in the army and force or not. While
some consider this
as an unnecessary course of action, others including me take a look at this
issue with an enlightened standpoint and assert that female battlers should be given the mentioned right due to
several basis
which will be mentioned in the following essay.
Based on history, there have been many female generals and soldiers who saved their motherlands with high perseverance and dauntless courage. With attention to Iranian general Artemisia whose decisions rescued thousands of Iranian soldiers and Change to a plural noun
bases
empire
of Achaemenid. Correct article usage
the empire
Accordingly
, Herodotus _the famous contemporary historian_ wrote that this
Persian commander defeated the territories by using five ships whereby the male counterparts got
surprised and ashamed. It must be remembered that many brave Verb problem
were
women
fought off the enemy, their names have been anonymous though.
Not only the historical evidences
prove the capability of Change the wording
evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
women
but also
the
modern societies have witnessed many skilled soldiers who can stand for their lands as patriots. Correct article usage
apply
Nevertheless
, some still amend hardly to suppress the feminine power in the front lines, however
in the Add a comma
however,
twenty first
century, the collaboration between both genders is in demand and eliminating gender inequality is crucial. Add a hyphen
twenty-first
Thus
, folks would be at lower risk of invasion, especially when women
can monitor incidents without getting overwhelmed due to
their multi-task brain structure.
To sum, there
is no need to show discrimination against Change preposition
up, there
women
in defending sectors, while
it has been proved that women
show up strongly in various criteria. To emphasize women
can learn and teach, work and supervise, vote and be voted. Besides
, their presence can be considered as an opportunity to oversee the problems from different standpoint
.Fix the agreement mistake
standpoints
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