In the modern era, technological advancements, especially
smartphones
, have become an
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our lives. There are numerous reasons why
children
spend
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majority of their lifetime using these high-tech gadgets
such
as the attractive contents
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inside them
as well as
the paucity of parental care towards their kids. From the writer's experience, I think
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to a detrimental impact on their health
also
social lives.
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must be mentioned. To explain it
further
, mobile phones in the current years are packed with differential appealing apps
such
as Facebook,
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or Instagram compared to the basic functions equipped in like calling or texting in the
last
few decades.
As a result
, the sophisticated artificial intelligence applied by the handsets's inventors will allow the users to approach the latest staggering but equally interesting news. With the same token, the
children
who seem to have
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intellectual curiosity would certainly be grabbed attention
as well as
kept hooked for a long period of time.
Lacking the indispensible care from parents is
also
considered as one of the prime causes of
this
. Particularly, once nuturers are
with their business and
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their kids, they
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to make use of
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offered
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children
.
However
,
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inevitable temptation
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teenagers which will
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a wide range of negative effects on
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if they deeply
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these high-tech devices in the long run. To
, a
survey in the USA reported that a
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80% of young citizens whose rarely
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parents take care of them spend at least 5 hours per day in front of mobile screens.
This
writer believes that
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children
's
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can put the users in
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health-related predicaments
also
social
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malfunctions. First and foremost, leading a sedentary lifestyle and regularly approaching blue light from mobile phones might exacerbate bouts of heart disease symptoms
coupled with
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irritation which ultimately hinder the hostilistic
. Dwelling on
smartphones
in the long run would probably provide
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people with the advantageous chances for making online friends, which equivalently means that
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friends in person will have the opportunities for deep conversations that create
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social
also
issues solving skills.
In conclusion, the case
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children
on a regular basis spend their time on
smartphones
stems from the captivating information wrapped internally
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with the scarcity of
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attention from parents, both of which could lead to the mitigation of health evolvement
as well as
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in real life.