You just moved to a new city to begin a new job. write a letter to a friend. In your letter tell you friend about your job. describe the neighborhood where you will live. Invite him or her to visit you. Write at least 150 words

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Dear Rahul, I hope you are doing well, it's been a long time since we met. I am writing to share some exciting news regarding my new job. I recently got a new job in my field and the job is mainly focused on coding tasks and testing the code developed by myself. There are many other things which are related to my role like client meetings, vendor meetings and some technical support work. My company suggested

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to move

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a driveble area

nearby

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near

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the office and

suprisingly

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surprisingly

, the office is

nearby

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your house. I have now moved to Toronto and it's really a nice city to live in. I live in Scarborough where the

neighborhood

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is really nice and the

house mates

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are

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very helpful. Since you are already in Toronto, let's catch up

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weekend

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your schedule and availability. I'll send you my address in a text message. Thanks, Tirth

tirththakkar23Sat Mar 16 2024

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Task Achievement

To enhance your task achievement, ensure that each part of the prompt is fully developed. While you touched on all aspects, expanding on your neighborhood's description could make your letter more engaging and comprehensive.

Coherence & Cohesion

For coherence and cohesion, try to create smoother transitions between topics and paragraphs. Although your letter has a clear structure, linking sentences could improve the flow and connections between ideas.

Overall Writing Improvement

Consider varying your sentence structures to make your writing more dynamic. Additionally, incorporating more detailed descriptions and personal reflections could enhance the reader's experience and engagement with your letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

157 words

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You just moved to a new city to begin a new job. write a letter to a friend. In your letter tell you friend about your job. describe the neighborhood where you will live. Invite him or her to visit you. Write at least 150 words

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