: The charts below show the number of registered road vehicles in use in a European country in 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

: The charts below show the number of registered road vehicles in use in a European country in 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The chart depicts the amount of both used and registered road vehicles in a country
that is
from Europe in 2006 and 1996 where units are measured in millions. We can see that
overall
, only the number of private cars is the most registered and used among all the other transport systems,
in contrast
, buses are the least amount. Enlisted motorcycles, lorries and other types are
also
quite low as opposed to enlisted private cars. In terms of listing privately owned cars, 19
million
and 24
million
are in 2006 and 1996 respectively
whereas
in both years, only .01
million
buses are listed.
In addition
, 1.0
million
enrolled motorcycles in 1996 in comparison to 0.6
million
enrolled in 2006.
However
, if we look at lorries, 0.5
million
(1996) and 0.4
million
(2006) are enlisted which is on the lower side as well.
Moreover
, other types of registered transport were 1.2
million
in 1996 compared to 1.9
million
in 2006.
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