: The charts below show the number of registered road vehicles in use in a European country in 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for : The charts below show the number of registered road vehicles in use in a European country in 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The chart depicts the amount of both used and registered road vehicles in a country

that is

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from Europe in 2006 and 1996 where units are measured in millions. We can see that

overall

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, only the number of private cars is the most registered and used among all the other transport systems,

in contrast

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, buses are the least amount. Enlisted motorcycles, lorries and other types are

also

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quite low as opposed to enlisted private cars. In terms of listing privately owned cars, 19

million

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and 24

million

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are in 2006 and 1996 respectively

whereas

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in both years, only .01

million

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buses are listed.

In addition

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, 1.0

million

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enrolled motorcycles in 1996 in comparison to 0.6

million

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enrolled in 2006.

However

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, if we look at lorries, 0.5

million

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(1996) and 0.4

million

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(2006) are enlisted which is on the lower side as well.

Moreover

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, other types of registered transport were 1.2

million

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in 1996 compared to 1.9

million

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in 2006.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

159 words

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