The diagram below shows the water cycle , which is the continuous movement if water in, above and below the surface of the earth.
The diagram below shows the
water
cycle,which is the continious
movement of Correct your spelling
continuous
water
on,above and below the surface of the Earth.
This
natural process goes through four main steps,starting with precipitation and ending with cloud formation.
Initially
, due to
precipitation snow on the top of the mountain melt
and lakes Correct subject-verb agreement
melts
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
formed
by Add a missing verb
are formed
rain
Correct your spelling
rainwater
water
estabilish
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establish
movement
of groundwater and it reaches Correct article usage
the movement
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the impervios
impervios
layer of the ground and some run on the surface.After that Correct your spelling
impervious
water
finds its way into the ocean where it evaporate
and Change the verb form
evaporates
condense
Wrong verb form
condenses
water
vapour.Finally
,condensed vapour form
the cloud.Correct your spelling
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