The diagram below shows the water cycle , which is the continuous movement if water in, above and below the surface of the earth.

The diagram below shows the water cycle , which is the continuous movement if water in, above and below the surface of the earth.
The diagram below shows the
water
cycle,which is the
continious
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continuous
movement of
water
on,above and below the surface of the Earth.
This
natural process goes through four main steps,starting with precipitation and ending with cloud formation.
Initially
,
due to
precipitation snow on the top of the mountain
melt
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and lakes
which
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apply
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formed
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by
rain
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rainwater
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water
estabilish
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establish
movement
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the movement
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of groundwater and it reaches
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the impervios
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impervios
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impervious
layer of the ground and some run on the surface.After that
water
finds its way into the ocean where it
evaporate
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and
condense
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water
vapour.
Finally
,condensed vapour
form
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from
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the cloud.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • transpiration
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • aquifers
  • percolation
  • surface runoff
  • replenishing
  • infiltrates
  • atmosphere
  • vapor
  • liquid
  • cycle
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