The diagram below shows the water cycle , which is the continuous movement if water in, above and below the surface of the earth.

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The diagram below shows the

water

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cycle,which is the

continious

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continuous

movement of

water

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on,above and below the surface of the Earth.

This

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natural process goes through four main steps,starting with precipitation and ending with cloud formation.

Initially

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due to

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precipitation snow on the top of the mountain

melt

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melts

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and lakes

which

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apply

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formed

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are formed

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rain

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rainwater

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water

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estabilish

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establish

movement

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the movement

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of groundwater and it reaches

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the impervios

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impervios

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impervious

layer of the ground and some run on the surface.After that

water

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finds its way into the ocean where it

evaporate

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evaporates

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and

condense

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condenses

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water

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vapour.

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,condensed vapour

form

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from

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the cloud.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Complete response

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3 paragraphs

92 words

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evaporation
transpiration
condensation
precipitation
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percolation
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The diagram below shows the water cycle , which is the continuous movement if water in, above and below the surface of the earth.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweight the disadvantages?