The diagram below shows the water cycle , which is the continuous movement if water in, above and below the surface of the earth.
The given graph represents the
water
cycle, which is the continuous movement of water
on, above and below the surface of the earth.
In general, the diagram of water
circulation is a natural process which includes four main phases like
forming, evaporation, renewal and condensing.
First of all, the cloud makes precipitation on the ground forming lakes and prods. Change preposition
apply
Next,
they crate
groundwater where it gets down, Correct your spelling
create
Correct word choice
and run
run
off on Correct subject-verb agreement
runs
surface
, overcoming impervious Add an article
the surface
layer
and reaching the coast. Fix the agreement mistake
layers
In addition
, it gets the salt
Correct your spelling
saltwater
water
intrusion and eventually falls into the ocean. Subsequently
, the ocean is filling up. And following
step, the sun heats the Change the article
the following
water
and evaporates (ocean
contributes about 80 percent of total Correct article usage
the ocean
water
vapor in air
). Add an article
the air
As a result
, it makes cloud which includes condensing water
vapour. And finally
, this
object will repeat the cycle again.Submitted by dnm.best on
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