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Provided diagrams illustrate information on the location options and the design of a wave-energy machine.

Provided diagrams illustrate information on the location options and the design of a wave-energy machine.
#diagrams #information #location #options #design #wave-energy #machine
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Contained in the diagram is information pertaining to
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the suitable
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suitable
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the suitable
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 place and design of the
machine
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 create produce
electricity
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 by
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wave
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a wave
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.
Overall
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, the
wave
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-
energy
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machine
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 which
located
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is located
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 suitably between large and small
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wave
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waves
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 has 2
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turbins
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turbines
turbine
use
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that use
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 the
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air
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airflow
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flow
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 to spin and make
electricity
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 Looking at how to create
electricity
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 by
wave
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,
it is clear that
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wave
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waves
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 direct onto the first floor which is known as the first
champer
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chamber
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, increase the water levels in order to make the
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air
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airflow
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flow
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 up, throughout the
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turbins
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turbines
turbine
.
Simutaniously
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Simultaneously
, the amount of the
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air
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airflow
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flow
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 up is similar to the
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air
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airflow
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flow
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 down, making the
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turbins
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turbines
turbine
 spin 2 times faster. As soon as the
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turbins
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turbines
turbine
 spin,
it
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they
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 provide
energy
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 for the
electricity
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 generator
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and turns
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turns
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turn
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 that
energy
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 into
electric
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electricity
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. Turning to the suitable location to take place
wave
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-
energy
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machine
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 in where having 2 columns is high and low installation costs. The reason for the large
waves column
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wave columns
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 which
have
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has
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 high output is to block the
energy
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 from
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the wave
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wave
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waves
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while
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 the small
waves
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wave
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 columns with low output
is
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apply
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increase the
energy
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 from
waves
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the waves
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, making the area between
that
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those
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 2 columns
is
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apply
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suitable for placing the
machine
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, electricity, wave, turbins, air, flow, energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 8 times.
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