why to appoint proposed Project manager? give your opinion.

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Project
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remaining works following
handing
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over of the
Project
,
this
is to inform
that
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we[GGC] propose
Mr.
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Shadi
to
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take over the responsibility of
Project
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the Project
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Manager in replacement of
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Robert Johnson effective from March 18, 2024.
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, carrying out pertinent
Project
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remaining
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,
Mr.
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Shadi will
also
oversee
Lusaily
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the Lusaily
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reservoir
Project
[RFX 39] snags works with
independent
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an independent
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team where the
project
is currently in
operational
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state and the snags clearance
are
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ongoing prior
handing
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over to DEWA.
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coherence cohesion
Start your essay with a brief introduction that contextualizes the topic and statement of purpose. This helps in setting the stage for your arguments and opinions.
coherence cohesion
Organize your content into clear, distinguishable paragraphs, each serving a specific purpose. Ideally, structure your essay with an introduction, body paragraphs detailing your arguments, and a conclusion.
task achievement
Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion on why Mr. Shadi should take over the project management role. This strengthens your argument and makes it more persuasive.
coherence cohesion
End your essay with a conclusion that summarizes your main points and restates why you believe Mr. Shadi is the right choice for the role, providing a clear ending to your argument.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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