The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The shown graph provides information about 4

diiferent

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different

materials

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recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. In conclusion, There were no matching

materials

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for paper and cardboard in

recycling

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the recycling

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rate

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, even after its recycling

rate

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dropped and other

materials

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rates are increasing.

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, The most recycled material from 1982 to 2010 is paper and cardboard. From 1982, its starting point was 65 per

cent

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, and after 1982, it was unstable to decrease and increase to reach its peak which was 80 per

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in 1994, and rapidly dropped until 2010 which landed

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70 per

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. After paper and cardboard, glass containers

emerges

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. It started from 50 per

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and dropped to 40 per

cent

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in 1990, but it showed

rapid

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a rapid

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increase in 1994 to land on its starting point

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and steadily increased until 2010 and landed

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60 per

cent

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Secondly

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The most

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the

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least recycled

materials

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were aluminium cans and plastics. These 2

materials

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started from the same recycling

rate

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which was 5 per

cent

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While

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aluminium cans

showing

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showed

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rapid

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a rapid

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increase, plastics

was

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were

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stable.

Aluminium

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The aluminium

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cans

rate

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was

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soared

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and reached 45 per

cent

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, but plastics showed little progress and reached 9 per

cent

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in 2010.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words materials, rate, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

200 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

proportion
recycled
materials
increased
paper and cardboard
plastic
glass
metal
significant increase
relatively stable
fluctuating
period
starting
reaching
gradually increasing
remained low
experienced
showed
greatest
proportion

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Some people think that the popularity of the cinemas around the world has declined. Do you agree or disagree?

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