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The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries, The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries, The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares modes of
transport
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 used in four countries:
Canada
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, Belgium, Germany and the Netherlands, and the percentage of journeys made by
car
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, bicycle, public
transport
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 and on foot. The bar chart shows the results of a survey into reasons people in
Canada
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 travel to work by
car
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. As can be seen from the table, cars were the most frequently used
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form
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 of
transport
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 in all four countries.
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, the proportion of journeys made by
car
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 ranged from a low of 47 per cent in the Netherlands to a high of 90 per cent in
Canada
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. Figures for other forms of
transport
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also
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 varied considerably. Not surprisingly, in the Netherlands, a high proportion of trips were made by bicycle (26%) and on foot (18%). The highest rate of public
transport
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 use was in Germany, where nearly one in five journeys was made by public
transport
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. The bar chart provides information that may help explain why
car
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 use in
Canada
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. The most frequently cited reason was
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the lack
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 of any other alternative (38%).
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 a sizable percentage said it was more convenient (12%), the other factors listed appeared to relate more to need than preference, e.g. working
night
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the night
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 shift.
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, the figures show considerable variation in modes of
transport
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 used, though the
car
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 continues to dominate.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, canada, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "considerably" was used 2 times.
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