The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the percentage of students
Correct pronoun usage
who participate
participate
in the four different Wrong verb form
participated
schools
from 2000 to 2009.
According to
the table, it can be seen that the proportion of children interested in Voluntary-controlled Schools
dropped slightly while
the Community Schools
rose steadily and the less of pupils enrolled was the Specialist Schools
and the Grammar Schools
.
In addition
, the Voluntary-controlled Schools
was
the highest Correct subject-verb agreement
were
to
52% whilst the Specialist and Community Change preposition
at
School
Fix the agreement mistake
Schools
was
Verb problem
had
the
similar percentage is 12% when Correct article usage
a
comparison
in 2000. Replace the word
compared
Moreover
, the Community Schools
was
sharply increased to 32% and 58% in 2005 and 2009 respectively Unnecessary verb
apply
nevertheless
the Voluntary-controlled Schools
fell to 38% in 2005 and hit a low point 20
% in 2009
Change preposition
of 20
On the other hand
, the Grammar Schools
and the Specialist Schools
was downward
trend and it had Add an article
a downward
the downward
the
nearly of percentage was 12% and 10% in the final year.Correct article usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words schools with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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