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The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.

The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.
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The bar chart illustrates the information of both
gender
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 students studies in six
difference
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sciences
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science
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 courses
at
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 the United Kingdom in 2019.
According to
 the chart, it can be seen that a higher
number
 of
males
 than
females
 choose to study each subject, with the exception of Veterinary
Medicine
.
To begin
 with both
of
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males
 and
females
interested
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 in a Biology subject, there were
significant
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approximately
by
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240 and 200 learners respectively. The noticeable from
the
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all subjects
is
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 Physics that have over 200 men
while
 the
number
 of women under 50 people so there were four times as many male students as female students.
Moreover
, the
number
 of
males
have
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similar
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a similar
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number
 in Astronomy and Geology
were
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150 people and
Veterinary
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the Veterinary
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Medicine
 subject has
females
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more females
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 than
males
 approximately 25 people. To summarize,
the
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mostly
females
favored
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 Biology,
Medicine
, and Veterinary
Medicine
.
On the other
hand
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males
 prefer
to
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Biology, Physics, and
Medicine
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, males, females, medicine with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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