the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planned future development of the site.
Thw
two maps illustrate the proposal of future changes Correct your spelling
The
an
industrial Change preposition
in an
area
in the city of Norbition
.
Correct your spelling
Norton
Overall
, in the future, the factory area
will have been completely transformed with new facilities such
as school
, shops and houses and new roads.
Looking Fix the agreement mistake
schools
further
into the details, today in the north-east has factory
section. Correct article usage
a factory
This
section will be turning into a housing development. Addionatly
, there are plans to construct Correct your spelling
Additionally
new
school, playground Add an article
a new
area
and medical centre near to the houses. Meanwhile,the main road will extent
to connect with the new residential Replace the word
extend
area
and shops in the north-west.
The river is locate
in the north of the industrial Change the verb form
is located
area
. A railway road will build
, crossing the industrial Wrong verb form
be built
area
to new
housing Correct article usage
a new
area
. The farmland will relocate in
the north-east of the Norbiton industrial Change preposition
to
area
. However
, the town will not under go
any changes.Correct your spelling
undergo
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