Describe your home When you write, you can mention the following: Where is it Different kinds of rooms Details of each room Choose the below set of words while writing the essay. Bedroom, Bathroom, Living Room, Hall, Kitchen, Toilet, Basement, Lift, Garden, Study, Dining Table, Wardrobe, Cupboard, Sofa, Bookcase, Shower, Dishwasher, Washing Machine.

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Most of us have a
home
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and we like to decorate our homes
according to
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our taste. A
home
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unlike a house contains feelings, emotions, love and care. My
home
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is located in
the
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apply
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Port Louis which is the capital of Mauritius. It is situated near a range of Mountains and we have access to various facilities and amenities in the area. My
home
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consists of one master bedroom, one living
room
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, a kitchen,
study
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a study
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room
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and
toilet
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a toilet
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and bathroom. The master bedroom contains lots of space and includes a bed and a wardrobe.
In addition
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, it contains a sofa bed which I use when my
families
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family
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come to stay at my place. The master bedroom
also
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consists of laminated flooring which is very important in winter seasons. My living
room
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includes a set of sofa and a television set. It is used to welcome
guest
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guests
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and
also
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during my resting time. It
also
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includes the dining table because I like to take my
diner
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dinner
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and watch television at the same time.
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,
i
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I
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have an American kitchen which is connected with my living
room
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. My kitchen contains a fridge, an oven, a
dish washer
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dishwasher
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and
cupboard
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a cupboard
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to keep my provisions.
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, I have a
small sized
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toilet and a bathroom. The bathroom includes my washing machine, bathtub and shower. We all like our
home
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structure
Make sure to include a clear introduction and conclusion to frame your essay. These elements help to establish your topic and summarize the main points effectively.
coherence
Ensure logical sequencing of ideas and use transitional words or phrases between sentences and paragraphs to improve flow. This makes your essay more cohesive and easier to follow.
task response
To achieve a higher score, aim for a more complete response to the prompt, including more elaborate details about each area of your home, and how these spaces reflect your personal taste.
language use
Incorporating varied sentence structures and a wider range of vocabulary related to the topic can further enhance the quality of your essay.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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